Refine release notes before kolla 2024.1 release

Change-Id: I9e4933cecd5c1e336b1bdc1072925fa73cd0c8ee

releasenotes/notes/prom-friendly-label-fix-dc665f81a0aa1081.yaml

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 fixes:
   - |
-    Adds missing support for friendly labels for Prometheus Ironic exporter and
-    Alertmanager metrics. `LP#2041855
-    <https://bugs.launchpad.net/kolla-ansible/+bug/2041855>`__
+    Support for friendly labels has been added for Prometheus Ironic exporter
+    and Alertmanager metrics. See `LP#2041855
+    <https://bugs.launchpad.net/kolla-ansible/+bug/2041855>`__ for details.

releasenotes/notes/re-add-neutron-fwaas-fb2211cf78ba2eb7.yaml

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 features:
   - |
-    Re-added support for neutron-fwaas v2. Set ``enable_neutron_fwaas: yes``
-    to enable.
+    Support for neutron-fwaas v2 has been re-added.
+    Set `enable_neutron_fwaas: yes` to enable.

releasenotes/notes/skyline-configure-prometheus-f86aea1beebcc379.yaml

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 features:
   - |
-    Configure Skyline's Prometheus connection to make the Monitor Center work.
-    The latest Skyline Console has now a Monitor Center in the administrator
-    view that displays information from Prometheus. For that to work the
-    Prometheus connection needs to be set up in skyline.yaml.
+    Configuration has been added to connect Skyline's Prometheus to make the
+    Monitor Center work. The latest Skyline Console now includes a Monitor
+    Center in the administrator view that displays information from Prometheus.
+    For this to work, the Prometheus connection needs to be set up in
+    skyline.yaml.

releasenotes/notes/skyline-customize-config-a877dc747028bf07.yaml

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 features:
   - |
-    Allow overriding of Skyline configuration files by supplying your own
-    version of nginx.conf for Skyline Console, gunicorn.py and skyline.yaml
-    for  Skyline API Server. Place the files in the skyline subfolder of
-    your Kolla config directory, skyline.yaml will be merged with the
-    Kolla provided version.
+    The ability to override Skyline configuration files has been added. You can
+    supply your own versions of nginx.conf for Skyline Console, gunicorn.py,
+    and skyline.yaml for the Skyline API Server. Place the files in the skyline
+    subfolder of your Kolla config directory; skyline.yaml will be merged with
+    the Kolla-provided version.

releasenotes/notes/skyline-include-more-services-3dbd5351966697cc.yaml

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 features:
   - |
-    Add more services now supported by Skyline to the configuration to make
-    them accessible to Skylines's frontend console.
-    New services include Barbican, Designate, Masakari and Swift or Ceph RGW.
-    Only one of Swift and CEph RGW can be used, if both are enabled, Swift is
-    configured.
+    More services supported by Skyline have been added to the configuration,
+    making them accessible to Skyline's frontend console. The new services
+    include Barbican, Designate, Masakari, and Swift or Ceph RGW. If both
+    Swift and Ceph RGW are enabled, only Swift is configured.

releasenotes/notes/skyline-sso-2036301-9a2118472dd0d8cf.yaml

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 features:
   - |
-    Enables SSO in Skyline Console if Keystone federation is enabled and
-    at least one identity provider with protocol openid is set up.
-    Skyline Console's redirect URI is added to Keystone's trusted dashboards.
+    Single Sign-On (SSO) is enabled in Skyline Console if Keystone federation
+    is enabled and at least one identity provider with the openid protocol
+    is set up. Skyline Console's redirect URI is added to Keystone's trusted
+    dashboards.