From f9b603872b038e9d5eb1bb620f9b8635b929721f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Michael A. Trimm" <mitrimm@cisco.com>
Date: Fri, 26 Feb 2016 11:51:26 -0500
Subject: [PATCH] Fixed slight gramatical issues that could be considered
confusing
Signed-off-by: Michael Trimm <mitrimm@cisco.com>
Change-Id: Iccd3c53526caf8b109ba4ede117eebf66958782d
---
doc/quickstart.rst | 26 +++++++++++++-------------
1 file changed, 13 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
diff --git a/doc/quickstart.rst b/doc/quickstart.rst
index e78c812e91..87af50a737 100644
--- a/doc/quickstart.rst
+++ b/doc/quickstart.rst
@@ -8,25 +8,25 @@ Two virtualized evaluation and development environment options are
available. These options permit the evaluation of Kolla without
disrupting the host operating system.
-If developing or evaluating Kolla on an OpenStack cloud environment that
-supports Heat, follow the :doc:`Heat evaluation and developer environment
-guide <heat-dev-env>`.
+If developing or evaluating Kolla on an OpenStack cloud
+environment that supports Heat, follow the :doc:`Heat evaluation
+and developer environment guide <heat-dev-env>`.
-If developing or evaluating Kolla on a system that provides VirtualBox or
-Libvirt in addition to Vagrant, use the Vagrant virtual environment documented
-in :doc:`Vagrant evaluation and
+If developing or evaluating Kolla on a system that provides
+VirtualBox or Libvirt in addition to Vagrant, use the Vagrant virtual
+environment documented in :doc:`Vagrant evaluation and
developer environment guide <vagrant-dev-env>`.
-If evaluating or deploying OpenStack on bare-metal with Kolla, follow the
-instructions in this document to get started.
+If evaluating or deploying OpenStack on bare-metal with Kolla,
+follow the instructions in this document to get started.
Host machine requirements
-------------------------
The recommended deployment target requirements:
-- Two network interfaces.
-- More than 8gb main memory.
+- 2 (or more) network interfaces.
+- At least 8gb main memory
- At least 40gb disk space.
.. NOTE:: Some commands below may require root permissions (e.g. pip, apt-get).
@@ -95,9 +95,9 @@ Copy Kolla configuration to /etc:
cp -r kolla/etc/kolla /etc/
Since Docker is required to build images as well as be present on all deployed
-targets, the Kolla community recommends installing the Docker Inc. packaged
-version of Docker for maximum stability and compatibility with the following
-command:
+targets, the Kolla community recommends installing the official Docker, Inc.
+packaged version of Docker for maximum stability and compatibility with the
+following command:
::
--
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